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What do you think of this ROMANCE poem that I whipped up?
So I wrote this a few weeks back and never really got any input on it. Any comments/advice would be greatly apreciated! Thanks =]
There we lay together on the beach
We are never further than an arm's reach
The sunshine is about to set
These are times we'll never forget
The ocean breeze cools our face
The amber sky glows in our eyes
This is the time and place
To let out our joyful cries
Mist fills the air
We begin to tire
We show each other we care
As the moon lifts higher
What a perfect evening
As you lie your head on my knees
I can hear your breathing
It sounds like passionate harmonies
As we head home
We pack up our blankets and head to the car
As our love for each other has been shown
In our hearts we'll never be far
Note: This is one of those fictional, perfect scenario-type pieces of writing.
Thanks for the corrections. I totally overlooked the face/faces part. Thanks for catching that =]
I think it is lovely...and knew it was probably fictional because being out on the beach at night isn't very safe anymore....at least not in California...but it used to be. And privacy is non existent.
Some of your English could be a little better.....
It should be "cools our faces"...or cools your face
and I would say this is "our" time and place....
and the last line could be better phrased....
but all in all I think it is very nice.
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